My revising process went better than expected. I think I organized my paper much better
since my “vomit draft.” In the first
draft, I kind of wrote about one idea, went to another idea, then ultimately
came back to the original one. Through
revising, I was able to organize the paper much better so that it really had a
logical flow of thought to it. Even
though it went well overall, there were still some frustrating parts to the process. The hardest thing for
me was to delete things that I have already written. I had to get past the personal aspect of my
writing and approach it critically. The
best analogy I can think of is a game of madden. The most frustrating thing that can happen is
when you play an entire game, forget to save, and then have to replay it. Once I have already completed something, I
hate to have to do it over again. But,
once I realized that I wasn’t as much doing it over again as I was making it
better, the revising process went pretty smoothly. There were several tools that helped me with
the revising process. First, the most
useful tool of revising was to print out my paper and approach it as if it were
another writer’s. In the past, I have
really only revised through my computer.
When I printed it out however, I was really able to see the flow of the
paper better, as well as grammatical mistakes I could mark down with a
pen. In the future, I will always print
my drafts out and revise them by hand.
Additionally, it helped me to speak my paper aloud. This is always the last step before my final draft, and I usually catch a couple of mistakes I couldn’t while reading
it. Looking at the comparison between by
initial and final drafts, I know the revising process was a success!

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